Here's something you might be interested in.
write me a letter
pen and paper
better
for me
to see
guessing
it's curly
letters
imagine
a heart
instead of a dot
marking the spot
above the i
by the way
i wrote
a letter to myself
today
more like a note
a helping hand
to make it through
those blue
tides of my day
sometimes
its difficult
to stand
on those bumpy rides
suggesting
maybe some changes
would help
realizing
not all fun
i don't need rainbows
after the greys
or a sunny
day at the beach
i just...
need you to understand
to know a little or a lot
more about me
why i'm so happy
and why (sometimes ) i'm not
maybe
hold off on writing me that letter
i will write you one
and when it's done
and sent
i can wait for your reply
and don't forget
the heart
instead of a dot
above the i
write me a letter
pen and paper
better
for me
to see
guessing
it's curly
letters
imagine
a heart
instead of a dot
marking the spot
above the i
by the way
i wrote
a letter to myself
today
more like a note
a helping hand
to make it through
those blue
tides of my day
sometimes
its difficult
to stand
on those bumpy rides
suggesting
maybe some changes
would help
realizing
not all fun
i don't need rainbows
after the greys
or a sunny
day at the beach
i just...
need you to understand
to know a little or a lot
more about me
why i'm so happy
and why (sometimes ) i'm not
maybe
hold off on writing me that letter
i will write you one
and when it's done
and sent
i can wait for your reply
and don't forget
the heart
instead of a dot
above the i
after a bit of a search i did find your latest - enjoyed it
RZ, THIS IS WONDERFUL! HERE, I'VE JUST THE PEN....
"I don't need rainbows"..."I just need you to know"...
is this a suggestion for a change ...if it is i like it ...take out understand ? can work on it ?
No--never. Just the words that hit me, that mean something to me in particular. Love it the way you wrote it:)
thanks ! more than happy to borrow that pen ...
gosh i love this RZ...it's a double sigh poem from an ever so sweet guy that deserves 2 letters!!! ;-D)
thanks so much ...keep those cards and letters coming -haha