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"Oh please, god, please...let me make it home.....please...."

I'm sweating more bullets than a dictionary is filled with a writer's idioms.

I've been on "E" since that damned city, and now on the freeway, i'm racing home...

Racing my heartbeat, who I am sure is winning.

Pleading with magic and toying with words to god to perchance lend me a grace of making it home.

If he can make the menorah last 8 days, surely getting me home on an empty gas tank is't too far of a stretch?

I make it up the hill of the 52...

Lip firmly bitten, stomach forming a solid wall of tightened muscle.

And I really need to urinate. Before that interview, even before that lunch, i had to go. And didn't.

Go figure.

Down the 52, across the bridge to the 125, going 76 miles per hour which is fast.

Real fast.

Passing a police cocked halfway out of his door, holding a speed gun in his face.

Shit.

"I never go this fast, I need to pee, and I'm on less than E...go figure he'd choose me of all these quick speeded motorists."

So for the next 3 or so miles, my gut is wrenched, i'm dripping sweat but let's not talk about fluid because i really need to pee.

Crooked eyed, i continue to drive.

One eye on the road, one behind my shoulder, which is a helluva trick, had I never seen the circus.

"come on, car...make it home, you can do this..pleeaaasseee make it home..."

Driving at a steadfast speed, over the last big bridge before the final stretch...

put. put. put.

Phuck.

"Get over to the right lane, slap this monster into neutral, let's what we can do..."

Beating my foot against the gas pedal I try to restart.

It shakes my bladder more than unpleasantly.

Nope. No such drips of gas in my tank.

So I cruise with hazards on, as far as I can make it.

One exit before my own.

One. Exit.

"Really...??!? All I wanted was to make it home. Not like i'm asking for 8 days of light!.."

I almost cry.

Then I see a construction worker in his car, parked behind me not too far off.

There's a green piss-box behind his car.

Yeah, it's that bad.

I have to pee that. bad.

I take a little walk,

"Hey! Would you mind letting me use your phone..once you're not on it?"

He said sure, so I smiled and went into that damn green box and strategized my pee.

You can't just go in one of these things. It must be planned, methodized, structured.

I plant my feet, a steady shoulder-width apart, pull down my slacks, and get a damn good leg workout hovering over the pot like that.

Then i fall.

I phucking fell.

Put my hand down to catch myself from falling into the urinal.

But my hand lands in something wet.

Gawdamit!

This is the shit writers hope for.

Something nasty to occur in a real life's day.

Inspiration to make readers sympathize and emotionalize the way I had to immediately compartmentalize my overwhelmed hypothalamus and get off with my pee.

Which took about 3 minutes.

After all this, I can't say I'm relieved. My hand is wet with something and I can only imagine it's not water.

I used the same hand, my right one, to use this poor fella's phone to dial my mom.

ring ring ring

"Hello?"

-"Hey mom, can you help me?"

"WHAAAT!!?!"

-"I ran out of gas and my car is stuck."

"Are you kidding me?"

(facepalm)

-"Yes, mom. This is a joke."

....

"Where are you?"

I gave her my coordinates. One exit before ours.

My overwhelmed body sits in the sunlight, waiting for my rescuer to arrive. I doze off a couple times, which is nice.

My throbbing cerebral cortex is chasing pains like hares.

Amygdala is flooded with neurotoxin.

Self produced.

Stress.

But on the bright side,

I had a hell of a day.

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Comments
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This is story brought me to comedic tears.

Feb. 20, 2012

Thank you, kameronj. I'm happy to know it has that effect on you. (:

Feb. 20, 2012

I love telling stories about my past miserable days, but I hate living them.

Feb. 20, 2012

That's because in the retelling we have the benefit of self defacing humor.

Feb. 20, 2012

I meant effacing...I think?

Feb. 20, 2012

I very well could have avoided this situation, but chose not to. I knew hilarity would ensue; something great to chuckle at. At least. The whole porta-toilet incident added to the grandeur of what happened. Didn't plan for that part, and it made it so much better.

Feb. 20, 2012

It did that.

Feb. 21, 2012

what angonizing fun!!!

i've prayed many a car home afraid to stop and pee...hilarious!!

Feb. 22, 2012

I usually avoid. repeat. AVOID. porta-toilets. But this time...i reaaalllyy had to go..!!

Feb. 23, 2012

Industrial parl alleyways do in a pinch;)

Feb. 23, 2012

Haha, that's so daring!!

Feb. 23, 2012

I laughed I peed a little.

Feb. 23, 2012

Muahahah. DianaGeorgina, miss, you have become part of a writer's evil pee-plot. (:

Feb. 24, 2012

What did we do before we gave coordinates?

Feb. 24, 2012

we peed our pants

Feb. 24, 2012

Peed in a porta toilet and lost my balance. Hand extended, landed in something unpleasant. This all before calling and giving coordinates of rescue location.

Feb. 24, 2012

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