choose a path...

getting lost

is how its

supposed to be -

future troubles

or problems past

don't stop and look

both ways

better times

like better ryhmes

the possibilities

walking your way

todays joy

is all you need-

to see

how much brighter

it can be

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Lisa O July 14, 2011 @ 8:37 a.m.

I like this one better than "grey." This one has promise, hope and good advice.


richzombie July 14, 2011 @ 2:43 p.m.

thank you very much for your comments ...rz


nan shartel July 16, 2011 @ 1:03 p.m.

i agree with chingobingo on this one ;-D


richzombie July 17, 2011 @ 10:59 a.m.

ok i totally understand ...but i really enjoy the the dumbness ? ( almost tempted to say simplicity but really now ) of stuff like grey . it comes from a different place and adds balance to my life .


nan shartel July 17, 2011 @ 12:07 p.m.

all r good as they r authentic RZ...a rare quality in any kind of writing ;-D


richzombie July 17, 2011 @ 3:30 p.m.

love your use of the word authentic ...going to remember to use that someday in response to how would i would describe my writing . Thanks ! rz


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