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Don Bauder 6:07 a.m., May 21
He comes, he stays,
then goes
without a thought
to me
sitting still beneath
a tree
watching him flit
from bud
to blossoming bloom.
*
His business is not
with me—
this busy body visitor,
this bumbled
honey bee with protruding
proboscis
dripping sun warmed nectar,
sweet sustenance
for a hive bound Queen.
*
Performing his elaborate song
and dance
for the wind and the grass
and the leaves,
he does not even notice me.
Were I nothing
but a microscopic mite
clinging
to his back I could fly with him
*
to whichever daisied meadow
or cockle belled
garden grew along tomorrow’s
pollen dusted
path an undetected passenger
on the semi-social
drone who colonizes
anonymously
amidst the summer’s swelling swarm.
Comments
nan shartel May 28, 2012 @ 7:58 p.m.
i want to say something but i won't beecharmer...lolol
i will say workmanlike poem...kudos
and God save the Queen!!!
Ruth Newell May 28, 2012 @ 8:29 p.m.
Workmanlike?
richzombie May 29, 2012 @ 9:48 a.m.
yeah - workmanlike - just like the busy bee going about his beesness -
Ruth Newell May 29, 2012 @ 9:59 a.m.
OO I LIKE that--BEEESNESS!!!!
nan shartel May 29, 2012 @ 11:19 a.m.
yep...that's it!!!
Ms Buzz Bucket!!
Ruth Newell May 29, 2012 @ 11:34 a.m.
Well I'll have to be now that you gave "hunny shorts" to Z. --Funny--If you only knew what this poem was really about. I'm really a fruitcake.
nan shartel May 29, 2012 @ 11:41 a.m.
he's only hunnyshorts in the summer cause it's hot...in winter he'll be hunnypants
u are still hunnypop and hunnyundies...but the second is 2 sexually implicit 4 the Reader soooooooooo...it will have to be Ms Buzz Bucket from now on...hahahahahahahaha
Ruth Newell May 29, 2012 @ 11:43 a.m.
UM, I'd say Dadler sent that Sexually Implicit standards here at the Reader WAY over the top...so I'd think hunny anythang would make the editorial cut.
nan shartel May 29, 2012 @ 11:55 a.m.
that story he wrote about that woman in Oregon was a real hunny alright...hahahahahahahahaha...they didn't remove it tho...i got a great mystery removed because of the mention of a hard pencil....hahahahahahahaha
Ruth Newell May 29, 2012 @ 1:08 p.m.
'Tisk, tisk. When WILL you learn?
nan shartel May 29, 2012 @ 1:32 p.m.
i don't think my stuff is usually in really poor taste
as a Scorpio u should understand that ....hahahahahahahahaha....swingin' high lady!!
Ruth Newell May 29, 2012 @ 1:55 p.m.
I know--pot-kettle:)
nan shartel May 29, 2012 @ 3:55 p.m.
uh huh....hahahahahahahahahaha
nan shartel May 29, 2012 @ 11:45 a.m.
now i must run and find u a bee thingie....oh here's one Ms Hunnypot!!
nan shartel May 29, 2012 @ 11:46 a.m.
nan shartel May 29, 2012 @ 11:50 a.m.
this dang bee is suppose to be flying dang it!!!
Ruth Newell May 29, 2012 @ 1:09 p.m.
Sweet!
Tallsharon June 2, 2012 @ 4:10 p.m.
i just had a bee pollinator move a whole buncha bees from my fence to escondido, and i got some sweet comb in the trade! liked this, light fanciful!
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