• Write a story for us

He comes, he stays,

then goes

without a thought

to me

sitting still beneath

a tree

watching him flit

from bud

to blossoming bloom.

*

His business is not

with me—

this busy body visitor,

this bumbled

honey bee with protruding

proboscis

dripping sun warmed nectar,

sweet sustenance

for a hive bound Queen.

*

Performing his elaborate song

and dance

for the wind and the grass

and the leaves,

he does not even notice me.

Were I nothing

but a microscopic mite

clinging

to his back I could fly with him

*

to whichever daisied meadow

or cockle belled

garden grew along tomorrow’s

pollen dusted

path an undetected passenger

on the semi-social

drone who colonizes

anonymously

amidst the summer’s swelling swarm.

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Comments

nan shartel May 28, 2012 @ 7:58 p.m.

i want to say something but i won't beecharmer...lolol

i will say workmanlike poem...kudos

and God save the Queen!!!

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richzombie May 29, 2012 @ 9:48 a.m.

yeah - workmanlike - just like the busy bee going about his beesness -

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Ruth Newell May 29, 2012 @ 11:34 a.m.

Well I'll have to be now that you gave "hunny shorts" to Z. --Funny--If you only knew what this poem was really about. I'm really a fruitcake.

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nan shartel May 29, 2012 @ 11:41 a.m.

he's only hunnyshorts in the summer cause it's hot...in winter he'll be hunnypants

u are still hunnypop and hunnyundies...but the second is 2 sexually implicit 4 the Reader soooooooooo...it will have to be Ms Buzz Bucket from now on...hahahahahahahaha

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Ruth Newell May 29, 2012 @ 11:43 a.m.

UM, I'd say Dadler sent that Sexually Implicit standards here at the Reader WAY over the top...so I'd think hunny anythang would make the editorial cut.

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nan shartel May 29, 2012 @ 11:55 a.m.

that story he wrote about that woman in Oregon was a real hunny alright...hahahahahahahahaha...they didn't remove it tho...i got a great mystery removed because of the mention of a hard pencil....hahahahahahahaha

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nan shartel May 29, 2012 @ 1:32 p.m.

i don't think my stuff is usually in really poor taste

as a Scorpio u should understand that ....hahahahahahahahaha....swingin' high lady!!

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nan shartel May 29, 2012 @ 11:45 a.m.

now i must run and find u a bee thingie....oh here's one Ms Hunnypot!!

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nan shartel May 29, 2012 @ 11:50 a.m.

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this dang bee is suppose to be flying dang it!!!

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Tallsharon June 2, 2012 @ 4:10 p.m.

i just had a bee pollinator move a whole buncha bees from my fence to escondido, and i got some sweet comb in the trade! liked this, light fanciful!

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