cracks in the concrete

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richzombie, May 7, 2012

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a golden dog

on the porch

your safari

hat

on the wooden chair

cracks in the concrete

the welcome on the mat

worn off

roses for the table

stand shift

i decline to sit

feeling uncomfortable

thinking

i can't go

any further

leave without

knocking

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Comments

Ruth Newell May 7, 2012 @ 6:07 p.m.

OK--more lyrics come to mind: "I never weep at night--I call your name."

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Ruth Newell May 7, 2012 @ 7:08 p.m.

Just walk on in and fry her up some of your famous potatoes. You can't go wrong.

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