no tic or toc

plenty of other

sounds

sticking

tickling my brain

all to some other sort of time

the rain in spain...

tumbling round with

lazy or crazy ?

a pixies song playing

where is my mind

bobb-ing beat

lyrics

that don't ryhme

but do -

haunting

me

telling someone

i should be somewhere

or else

going

to have to go

anywhere

but there

Comments

Ruth Newell Jan. 31, 2012 @ 5:48 a.m.

Wow. Just reread this and understood something completely different than before.

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richzombie Jan. 31, 2012 @ 10:11 a.m.

coffee shop in ob - lazy hummingbird - location of inspiration ...glad upon re-reading it you understood it differently - like that -

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richzombie Jan. 31, 2012 @ 5:24 p.m.

i do like this one also - had a nice feeling going on partly because i was on my third cup of coffee - and the location was just great - too

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nphoodie Jan. 31, 2012 @ 5:40 p.m.

almost missed this one , my friend. it's not posting on main page but very good !

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Ruth Newell Jan. 31, 2012 @ 7:28 p.m.

I don't think any of them do anymore. No worries. I know where you all hide.

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richzombie Feb. 1, 2012 @ 3:02 p.m.

i have to keep my secrets more secret -haha

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