Volume 2: The Dgenius
Barnaby Monk 1:14 p.m., June 19
you are a simple, elegant sentence:
“she is quiet, smart and patient.”
verbs may evade you, but adjectives do not:
loving, tolerant, enduring, steady, lovely.
lovely. my love. you are. there is a verb.
paragraphs cannot capture you,
nor even books. so why
do i write this verse? because
like you it does not waste
a word.
Comments
kza Aug. 10, 2012 @ 10:56 a.m.
what a beautiful poem. she's a lucky lady.
Dadler Aug. 10, 2012 @ 11:56 a.m.
ow chicka ow-ow. wink wink.
richzombie Aug. 13, 2012 @ 11:12 a.m.
right - on ... add my nod and a wink
Dadler Aug. 16, 2012 @ 4:35 p.m.
I added it. She blushed. Good job.
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