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David Dodd 2:53 a.m., May 21
Your voice arrives fast 'or the sea
so soft and coyly caring
so i surrender my ear
to your calming sharings
*
it was sweet as a dove's recollection
cooing in branches of Green lovers trees
a sweet soothing sonata
hangs delicately in that breeze
*
as i touched your essence in the water below
your mystery brightened glowing in the undertow
i have no fear of it
only fierceness is what's survived
*
our mutual intangibles still stay alive
they seek the tenderness
in the fluid mirror of the waves
and cater to the luminary sheen
Comments
Ruth Newell March 27, 2012 @ 2:35 p.m.
No fear, only fierceness...I am certain you are in good company.
nan shartel March 27, 2012 @ 2:42 p.m.
a man must be as fierce as myself to truly intertwine with my spirit...i don't ask 4 this as a prerequisite 4 friendship...but i do as a potion 4 growth when loving...magic beans or tight lipped clams notwithstanding
nan shartel March 27, 2012 @ 2:44 p.m.
how r ya doin' Roody dear??
Ruth Newell March 30, 2012 @ 4:43 p.m.
Floating on the breeze, face in the sun until my last day is done.
nan shartel March 31, 2012 @ 10:10 p.m.
gypsy moth...yahoo!!
nan shartel March 30, 2012 @ 2:43 a.m.
i understand Mindy....hoping u find a man who's a real page turner ;-D)
quillpena March 27, 2012 @ 5:07 p.m.
Very nice, nan. We men can be nice to have around sometimes ... right?
nan shartel March 30, 2012 @ 2:46 a.m.
a man is like the breath of spring to a woman longing...i love men...the right kind of men are treasures worth waiting a lifetime for Quill
nan shartel April 7, 2012 @ 6:14 p.m.
whether ur wearing underwear or not Quill
Ruth Newell March 30, 2012 @ 4:45 p.m.
Depends on the man; depends on the woman. No? I'm glad YOU are around if that's any consolation, Quill. A life time's a long time. But, some loves are worth forever; some loves are flames that are never doused.
nan shartel March 31, 2012 @ 10:08 p.m.
ditto Roody!!!
Tallsharon March 27, 2012 @ 5:28 p.m.
Fierce as myself to truly intertwine. Not an very day occurrence, but always a fond memory with a whisper of longing
nan shartel March 30, 2012 @ 2:46 a.m.
yes Tall Sharon...u perceive me perfectly
nan shartel May 10, 2012 @ 3:39 p.m.
i edited and lengthened this peeps...if ur interested
Twister May 11, 2012 @ 1:14 p.m.
Let's see it.
nan shartel May 11, 2012 @ 5:51 p.m.
it's only the last stanza Twister
Jay Allen Sanford May 11, 2012 @ 4:19 a.m.
Very cool!
nan shartel May 11, 2012 @ 5:51 p.m.
thank you very much JAS
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