By richzombie, March 5, 2012
but never bleed
tear of blood
you will ever see
that's just the way
i'm going to be
The switch. More power to you, Mr. LOVELY.
I bounce rather than break. Is that the same?
i would say so ... but that's not exactly what i was writing about - but i do like your take
Oh--what were you writing about?
a short one ... i like it
i was like that as a kid in a situation i considered hopeless to change...sigh...:(
nan - thanks for reading -the poem is about crying - and how much it hurts to cry - so i don't / or if i did ( which i cannot recall the last time ) no one is going to see me cry ...
Ah, so not quite about that Switch that QP and I had discussed at one point. I can't even imagine not being able to cry--that too I suppose is a blessing AND a curse, Zman. None the less--lovely title and nicely written. Fiction won a place in this month's blog contest--did you notice? Perhaps one of your poems will win next months as you are the most prolific among all of us. Your poetry has changed some over the course of the last year (almost) that I've been reading it. Stylistically. Both good, so don't stop writing. Please.
i know the feeling well RZ :(
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