Memorial Day celebration in San Diego County
Eva Knott 6:37 p.m., May 25
my el cajon boulevard
felt through eyes blood shot
and thoughts
forgotten
distorted
by proof
never too great
skip the warning labels
natures light long gone
nothing
shiny or neat
about this hour
my favorite
more than a street
forgiveness
that my line
not always straight
a walk along used sidewalks
way past everyone's bed time
random shadows
dart around
real
never introduced
black and whites
tucked out of sight
only me and them know
where
no crowds
or cowards to share my path
bartenders already home
even though my stride
is flat footed
the boulevard
knows i am among the last
just passing through
both needing this time to heal
no care to look up
for even one star
rudfords
always there
nearing the end of my trek
a diner not so far
coffee and pie
and a friendly waitress
is all i desire
Comments
Ruth Newell Feb. 23, 2012 @ 12:05 p.m.
So why is it I don't believe you? And there's mention of PIE again! Not even funny.
richzombie Feb. 24, 2012 @ 10:13 a.m.
not sure if it matters ...but i actually wrote this on a napkin at rudfords around 3am - had blueberry pie but cannot recall if waitress asked if i wanted it heated up or not ...can't imagine many would believe this - even best of friends wonder why - but i posted it because i liked it - you know maybe a different view of one san diego's most famous or is it infamous streets- maybe you should check out the blvd sometime - on foot the best way or you could just google it.
Ruth Newell Feb. 27, 2012 @ 4:39 p.m.
I will--Googled those other two streets you wrote about and landed on the Sunset Cliff Inn and Alex's music! Wrote a blip on that experience but not sure you had a chance to read it yet--thinking its right up your alley.
richzombie Feb. 28, 2012 @ 11:41 a.m.
ok cool - next stop roody2's
kameronj Feb. 24, 2012 @ 11:09 a.m.
When the street is yours and a breeze is your best friend. I have similar experiances with "my" Newport Street. Late night walks. This poem reminds me of my own. Its a welcome reminder. :) Thank you.
richzombie Feb. 27, 2012 @ 10:48 a.m.
kameronj - you get it - i know of your newport .
very cool thanks !
GasparMedeiros Feb. 27, 2012 @ 10:52 a.m.
I like it ...mine is a dirt path . In the day time,though.
richzombie Feb. 27, 2012 @ 10:54 a.m.
haha - thanks
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