By richzombie, August 2, 2011
been on a train
out of my mind
behind the wheel
for a brake
been on this train
that's cool - to hear. thanks ! struggled with the ending/ last few words ...and it finally came to me.
I love it when it does that...finally comes to you. Thank you O Inspired Zombie, Rich or otherwise--good words.
Yup--still think you nailed the ending.
good one ;-D
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