been on a train

travelling

out of my mind

behind the wheel

can't see

ahead

crashes behind

looking

for a brake

or

a sign

been on this train

travelling

out of my mind

too long

its time

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richzombie Aug. 3, 2011 @ 7:20 a.m.

that's cool - to hear. thanks ! struggled with the ending/ last few words ...and it finally came to me.

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Ruth Newell Aug. 3, 2011 @ 9:02 a.m.

I love it when it does that...finally comes to you. Thank you O Inspired Zombie, Rich or otherwise--good words.

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Ruth Newell Aug. 18, 2011 @ 10:47 a.m.

Yup--still think you nailed the ending.

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