moving12

Comments by moving12

The Oil War

The author(s)does not give any information regarding the setting or characters.The author(s)merely thrust you straight into the narrative.If this story takes place in another country,the author doesen't give any evidence of it.Furthermore I find the author's preachy manner annoying,I mean listen to her."today, I feel sorry when I see the kid's playing because they're playing with a machine,I consider it a mockery of playing..."SHUT UP YOU STUPID MISGUIDED IDEALIST!You might think I'm being harsh,but such a grotesque narrative deserves it.
— June 17, 2008 9:44 p.m.

The Oil War

This is some of the worst writing I have ever read.It deviates greatly from it's already stupid topic.This author is not even an author,she's a butcher.She butchers her topic. My score for it is 0/10.
— June 17, 2008 1:31 p.m.

The Oil War

Could someone please explain the reasoning behing this insipid article? No, don't, there is not a point. Obviously it takes no writing ability at all to be featured on this website.
— June 17, 2008 1:24 p.m.