Burch better but not quite good enough yet
David Dodd 1:48 a.m., May 18
—for Poff
We settled to great small talk on the back porch
Despite green skies and scratchy radio warnings;
The beer was cold and the rain came down in sheets
To simmer a stew in the gutters — Texas summer
Was wild with the life of a single weather pattern.
We smoked it, talked it, and drank away the hours…
But your life was revolving one way, off-kilter,
With crazy winds dividing and threading through
Your attention to studies, love and betrayal.
And I was turned another way, tearing up and away
From Dallas — though at that moment friendship,
A loose roof shingle wavering in the gale, adhered.
Joseph O’Brien was born in Freehold, New Jersey, and lives on a homestead with his wife and eight children in rural Soldiers Grove, Wisconsin. He currently works as a staff writer for The Catholic Times, newspaper of the Catholic Diocese of La Crosse, and as a freelance writer. He has published three volumes of verse with Stone Silo Press and his poems have appeared in a number of literary journals. “Cataracts and Hurricanoes” is from Departure at Hebrus, forthcoming from Korrektiv Press. The author’s photograph is by Gordon Browning. The poem is published by permission.
Comments
nan shartel Jan. 20, 2011 @ 7:10 a.m.
brilliant!!!
CurtainCall Jan. 20, 2011 @ 1:22 p.m.
I agree with Nan. The imagery of friendship being a lose shingle adhering despite the storm of the life in this world is brilliant. Bravo O'Brien. I look forward to more.
job Jan. 21, 2011 @ 9:33 a.m.
nan, Curtaincall,
Thanks kindly for your comments.
Much obliged,
JOB
nan shartel Jan. 21, 2011 @ 4:12 p.m.
no worries job...we calls em like we sees em
this WAS a brilliant poem...the wording caught and emphasized exactly ur thoughts thruout the poem
example: "To simmer a stew in the gutters — Texas summer"
i hope they publish u here again!
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